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Not bad for a first flash - the drawings were good, but the animation was very clunky.
To make the animation run faster you can change the FPS rate to a higher number.
There is a number under the timeline that says 'fps' after it. Tweek that until your animation is smooth.

And sounds arent too hard to put into films at all. All you need to do is go to file>import and then upload the sound. Drag the sound from the library, onto the stage and the sound is in the animation!
Simple as!

Good luck with your next animation/game!

Scorpiastudios :)

Zariox responds:

Oh thanks :3!- Im working on another newb stuff. this time with sound :D!- Happy new year!

Not bad

Hrmmm....

The animation isn't too bad to be honest. It's nice and fluid, and you have used FBF and Tweens effectively in most places.

The main issue I have, is that you have to right click at the beginning of the movie to make it play :/
You may want to fix that.

Also, the background was a strange choice of colour. Try not to use 'too bright' colours, as they can be overpowering when watching flash movies. Use a background that doesn't drag too much attention to itself.

Some of the things I really liked, like the shapes coming out of the blue box. It felt like a magic trick you'd see at a fairground.

Good luck with your next animation :)

Scorpia Studios

oscar11122 responds:

The "Play" Button are the 3 shapes on the top

Cool

A nice animation, with a good message. Really well done seeing as you're new to flash.
All you need to work on; is your drawing, and timing. other than that, a pretty good submission.
Good luck with your future submissions!

Lone-X responds:

TYVM! <3

Great!

Haha, that's a way of putting frame by frame.
The jokes were good....

Frame by frame, always the best... Tween, I'm not sure anyone's that keen on them.

AtroxChobatsu responds:

Yeah! A lot of people I know shorten it to FBF.

Thanks!

Great!

Yeah, the animation was great, but... The song wasnt written by Bobby Day, i was actually one of the most famous Jackson 5 songs.

But, we're not rating it on that, so... I give you nine for everything else! =D

AntonyC responds:

Hey thanks.
Actually, it was written by Bobby the year Michael was born.
From Wiki:
"The song was covered by The Hollies on their first album in 1964 and would be revived as a single again in 1972 by the teenaged Michael Jackson as his second single release on Motown. "

Awesome

The only problem is that you have put a warning to say that you will need flash player ten, and people that do not have flash 10 will not be able to view it, because the warning is in the animation timeline.

HotDiggedyDemon responds:

YOU'RE NOT TOM FULP

Hey!

Excellent, the animation runs smoothly, and it actually looks like you were touturing that 'corn'
Great work!

molkman responds:

Thanks. :)

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